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Lost Paradise

Swat, Dwelling of the scented and angelic souls

A land, once was a country`s dear
now passing through turmoil years,
Where health and beauty cheered and craze
how often her charm was praised,
thy snowy hills and rosy land.
The never failing brooks and smiling springs,
the enchanting breeze and the lovely scene,
People call it heaven on the land.

But I tell you now.......
These were her charms and all are fled,
By divine writ thy luxury cursed,
Those lovely hours once her pride
Now lust and lies instead abide.

Rivers serene storm in anger,
Sky hills blooded and too danger
The land trodden by armies' dark
Guns roar with a question mark.
Ah look at that mountain`s fairy
Her eyes full of quarries
Searching for her love and peace
But uncertain and unsure.

Where dusk terrifies and hurting dawn
and the starry sky wailing and wane,
Sages are quiet and the young abstain
O never step into this fairyland
But pray to have our serenity again

Good Heaven!
What sorrows doom that parting regime?
Why Nightmares reign our lovely dreams?
and shatter the hearts serene.
To whom I blame,
Soldiers of the god…..?
Or soldiers of Land...?

Let's hail the shedding blood
of the poor innocent being,
they are suffering but never complain,
And sing a coral in melancholy strains,
No beauty adorns their fairy eyes,
truth decay and false arise.

O, tears from the depth of divine despair
Rise in the heart and turn into fears,
But my faith never disappears,
Have vision that dazzles my eyes
And behold a lost paradise.

Submitted: Saturday, October 20, 2012
Edited: Saturday, March 09, 2013


Poet's Notes about The Poem

this poem was composed when dark armies hit our sweet heaven in 2008.dedicated to those who loves nature and liberty.
help has been taken form the poem deserted village

Comments about this poem (Lost Paradise by Gulsher john )

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  • Yours Forever X (2/9/2013 11:54:00 AM)

    aww its so full of emotion and a little of anger! gr8 write.

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  • Meena Mustafa (12/3/2012 7:42:00 PM)

    An excellent write with a lovely depiction. Keep penning :)

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  • * Sunprincess * (11/1/2012 11:52:00 AM)

    wow...thanks for the poet's notes..i read it as the earth is
    the paradise lost...awesome poem.. :)

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  • The Reader (10/31/2012 9:29:00 AM)

    two humble suggestions:

    dwelling instead of dwell
    and
    The never failing brooks and smiling springs,

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  • Jahan Zeb (10/27/2012 9:52:00 AM)

    You have wonderfully sketched Sawat. A place that will not let you go once you visit it. And the people are so nice and soft hearted.

    This is a serious question.
    To whom I blame,
    Soldiers of the god…..?
    Or soldiers of Land
    Let hail the shedding blood

    Your words are poetical and you know poetry. Gifted dear
    Jahanzeb

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  • Yash Shinde (10/25/2012 7:42:00 AM)

    wonderful imagery well written great use of words loved it :)

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  • Fatma Ballaswud (10/22/2012 12:13:00 PM)

    I enjoyed reading your poem! It's a wonderful piece

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  • Hazel Evelyn Durham (10/21/2012 3:23:00 PM)

    Great write, so beautifully written with wonderful imagery, inspired write!

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  • Asif Andalib (10/20/2012 5:16:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem written in old English

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