Love Poem by Asif Baloch

two hearts one beat one dream two greet I call this love what you say Asif? +++++++10 as always regards anjali

Very beautiful, suggestive poem. Each word does the job it must do. No superfluous, needless words. The lines suggest a deep, intimate union, a wholeness achieved through the comingling of the physical and the spiritual. Good job! (Only one linking verb needed: 'this is what IS called love.'

beautifully wrapped up feeling. Dear Asif, Is your this poem according to the parameters of the haiko? i suspect it is not. please consult Mr. Yoonoos Peerbocus.

WOW IS HAIKU, PLEASE MR AIZAS i WANT TO BE YOUR STUDENT thanx

Captures a lot in those words