Love Poem by Howard Johnson

Love

Rating: 4.2


Love is fleeing
Requires daily work to grasp its fashion
Like black and white rainbows

Impassioned rejection
Uncontrolable intimate addiction

Could saftely individualize
Walls built
Bricks of egotism
Neat impassive layered rows
Mortar made with efficent channeled efficaious pain
Impersonation of a contending composure
Courious,
Aluring Infatuation
Unoticed
Endorsing accumulative decietful foundation cracks.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Perry Busch 01 March 2006

Howard, Although your poem reflects signs of hurt its message is very clear to me. Is love really only a dream? I fear that many of us don't understand that it doesn't matter. Love to dream, dream to love. By doing this you will have the best of each and both will expand and blossom. Perry

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Amberlee Carter 02 March 2006

overall I enjoyed the message of this piece. though it did feel a little disconnected, and I had a hard time getting really personal with the poem..I did enjoy it though.. Always, Amberlee

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Deana Rode 27 May 2006

I like this one...it's nice and I can relate to it *nods*

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Michael Gale 15 September 2006

Great poem. Gave ya a ten. The words built and fleeting are mispelled. Other than that this poem is excellent. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Anna Cellmer 20 October 2006

Very nice poem i like how you captured this the most beautiful topic of poetry here especially like this 'uncontrolable intimate addiction' best wishes and lot of addiction like this Anna

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I'm about to run out the door, but I wanted to take the time to tell you how much I enjoyed this poem. And I'll for sure be reading more of your work. Peace, L&T

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Leah Dsouza 11 January 2008

Dear Howard, its kind of you to write of you on my poem [put a smile upon your face]. well how did you read it? this topic's not quite common! Your poem's better than mine! Beat Regards.... Leah

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Ewigi Liebe 09 January 2008

Love how its flowing the rhyms specially the end requires daily work to grasp its fashipn like black and white rainbows.

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Aurora Bell 19 December 2007

This poem has a beautiful rythm and well chosen language. A lovely poem to soak in

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Samantha lynn 01 February 2007

see now this is a great poem! i 'Really really liked this poem' It felt like the world stopped just a moment to read this poem lol. Love it Samantha Lynn

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