Love Poem by Sylvia Thomas

Love

Rating: 4.5


the simpliest form of emotion
that complicates your world.
you never forget that
feeling

I dream of all dreams
of a girl, like every girl
she cries with pain
because she's tortured
by that chain of desire
that swallows up her heart.

It carries the flow
of the soul that dances
of the tears that scream
and the silence that all understand.

It is unseen,
yet it can be felt.
it is a dream,
that soars to the infinite sky

It is reality
right in your face
It is the warmth
that protects you from hiding.

You smile and cry
Your tears can prove
that you're
in love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 July 2008

Lovely composition..............

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Dee Daffodil 06 September 2006

You have a very keen ability to analyze emotions, and be very specific about the effect of emotions on people. This is a lovely quality to have. Well done. Hugs, Dee

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John Walls 31 August 2006

Beautiful Poem! It's wonderfully composed, and the last line really made its mark with me. -John

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Evymic Moore 25 August 2006

wow that's kinda deep i like it

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Michael Gale 23 August 2006

A beautiful piece of Lit you've writ that dances around the inside of thine head with a magical note in close proximity of the heart strings played yet gently so tender and dear. God bless all poets-MJG.

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