Love At First Sight............ Poem by kimberley tuck

Love At First Sight............

Rating: 4.3


Love at first sight;
Is wonderful and bright;
Love is sweet;
Love is everything you can't defeat;
It's amazing feeling to have;
Love is blind and also kind is horride sometimes;
When you lose the feeling of being in love it's like loseing your life;
It's cruel and torture when your alone;
Can't feel anythnig but pain and Bone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 12 August 2008

A delightful and capturing write Kimberly! A pleasure indeed - to read! ! *10*! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Neojuna Riddick 11 August 2008

Wonderful poem. Have you noticed the Brutal Ms Kaye Cee? You are a great writer. Thank you for writing for you. Never change a style that it truly all your own

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Kaye Cee 11 August 2008

Kim, how about: Love is sweet/ everything you can't defeat It's 'an' amazing feeling to own Love is blind and also kind/ and horrid sometimes. It's torture when 'you're' alone; /cruel./ Loseing should be losing.

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