Love at first sight;
Is wonderful and bright;
Love is sweet;
Love is everything you can't defeat;
It's amazing feeling to have;
Love is blind and also kind is horride sometimes;
When you lose the feeling of being in love it's like loseing your life;
It's cruel and torture when your alone;
Can't feel anythnig but pain and Bone.
Wonderful poem. Have you noticed the Brutal Ms Kaye Cee? You are a great writer. Thank you for writing for you. Never change a style that it truly all your own
Kim, how about: Love is sweet/ everything you can't defeat It's 'an' amazing feeling to own Love is blind and also kind/ and horrid sometimes. It's torture when 'you're' alone; /cruel./ Loseing should be losing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A delightful and capturing write Kimberly! A pleasure indeed - to read! ! *10*! Best wishes! Friend Thad