Love Dubs Poem by Queeny Gona

Love Dubs

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Please hurt me with your discipline
Isolate me not with your silence,

My heart may tolerate the thongs of your banging
Yet my soul palpitates at your thundering reluctance,

Tease me, squeeze me yet they ease me
Sit not quiet and make me lonesome my dear love-some!

Monday, June 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 22 June 2016

With your discipline! ! Nice work.

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Chinedu Dike 04 September 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and elegantly penned in poetic diction from the heart. I like the conviction of the poem. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Queeny and do remain blessed. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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Queeny Gona 07 September 2015

Thanks for the read and valuable comment sir. I enjoyed reading THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.. Thanks for sharing!

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Valsa George 25 June 2015

A very sweet write Queeny! Harsh words from our loved ones, we can somehow tolerate! But indifference is something unbearable and can plunge one into despair!

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