Michael Peterson

Rookie - 10 Points (Janesville, Wisconsin)

Love Eternity You - Poem by Michael Peterson

Meeting the first time was childish
meeting as young adults, miracle
dating as a couple, amazing
breaking up, heartbreaking
meeting up a few years later, crazy
getting married, Very Insane
having kids, kidtantics
being together thru the ups and downs, turbines
making up and out, so frickin hot
spending many years and decades together, Timeless
getting old and being grand parents, Creaking Awesome
there no one else in the world to be around, then to be with you
All the memories and the smiles brings happiness to us all
To live with you till eternity will be heaven
for it's you and I that make the world go round
for the time we have together means the world to me
Nothing can stop the endless love for you
growing and loving you, So breathless


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Wrote this in the Hospital next to my wife recovery from a medical issue

Comments about Love Eternity You by Michael Peterson

  • Rookie - 94 Points Jahan Zeb (12/5/2012 9:35:00 AM)

    for it's you and I that make the world go round
    for the time we have together means the world to me.......... That is how our attitude should be. May you be blessed with all the happiness of the world.

    This was my first visit to your poems and satisfied. Great poem. Nice to read the progress of life from childish first meeting till each other's world. Loved this. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 17, 2012


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