Love Gone Poem by James Timothy Jarrett

Love Gone

Rating: 5.0


I wish for you

All that you gave to me,

As I gave to you

All that I had.

You thought that

I would love forever;

Until I couldn't.

Care for you;

Until I wouldn't.

Give to you

As long you could take.

Until you took

My love

And made it hate

I hope someday

That someone

will give

To you

What you gave

To me

My love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 12 January 2009

Plaintive and appealing Jim. - - - and just the right length....... hope the message got home! ! Wrtten with your usual strength.... and a 10 from Fay with best wishes.

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