the clouds cleared
to give way to sunshine
i felt the warmth
outside and inside
felt different but felt good
for i knew, i knew
i was in love
her smile so innocent
her talks so kiddish
enjoyin evry moment
captivated in her presence
felt like evrythin
as i wished, i wished
tat she loved me too
i decided to tell her
after i achieved
laurels in my life
so tat i cud
keep her happy always
for i hoped, i hoped
tat she wud wait
distance seperated
body and soul
as i walked thru my decision
to come up in life
with her sweet thoughts
i waited, i waited
for days to fly by
one day, she said she loved
not me but someone
more wonderful and nice
coz she was tired
of waiting for me
and she thought, she thought
she deserved someone better
the sun was still high
spreading its warmth
but inside i felt
cold and painful
for i lost my love
and i longed, i longed
for a shoulder to cry
unable to cry
and no friends to comfort
longing for my mother's lap
my dreams, my hopes and
my love failed
as i am, i am
cupid's ugly duckling...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I wonder if things would have been different if you had told her how you felt, long before she got tired of waiting... Very poignant...well done! Hugs, Dee