Love In Infinity Poem by Awsaaf Ali

Love In Infinity

Rating: 2.8


In the wild dimensions where the love raced into infinity,
There she whispers from the black hole, 'love is just another name for curiosity...'

Tasting the sound that drops from her lip,
There it licked the light under that shade of the gallows...
When the tears dried on the banks of the dead ocean,
The rocks rested with the air in the cave of ice...

Repeated blisses, on those lips, those repeated kisses froze,
Where she dropped her attire and threw her velvet shoes.
Where the heart of love shall stop beating on the curse of misunderstandings,
Darkness shall hug the cave, where with me, you're withstanding!

Sunday, March 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem requires little deep concentration. :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
B.m. Biswas 20 January 2016

a lovely poem......love is infinity....not black hole...black hole would turn to lightning if love exits...

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 January 2016

Just sent a comment on your poem and voted you a big 10. Would you read my poem “If you die before me” and send comments and vote it. I did it for you now. Thank you very much. God bless you. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 January 2016

Where the heart of love shall stop beating on the curse of misunderstandings, Darkness shall hug the cave, where with me, you're withstanding! pathetic end to a love which began talking about infinity.. taste, lick, lips, fascination, tears, rocks, cave of ice. so many images in your poem. lovely poem with a sad end. thank you very much dear poet. tony

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Shania K. Younce 24 March 2014

I very much like this poem. Bien!

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Awsaaf Ali

Awsaaf Ali

Hyderabad, India.
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