Love In The Moonlight (A Senryu) Poem by Susan Williams
Love In The Moonlight (A Senryu)
moonlight rides the sky
spilling shadows like a quilt
over his shoulders
I enjoy reading comments like this! Tells me I succeeded in reaching out and touching another soul
moonlight rides the sky spilling shadows like a quilt over his shoulders......wow, what an impressive expression! Beautiful poem with lofty theme. Thank you again dear madam for sharing this tiny gem.
I am so glad my dear friend has found such enjoyment in this piece which I still find enjoyment in! ! ! ! !
A pleasant and pleasing use of personification device that empower this short but significant work!
I am sorry it took forever to reply. My e-mail decided that all messages from PoemHunter were scam and dumped them in the scam folder.. I was getting all weepy thinking no one liked me : ( I should have known better! Thank you for your comment about the effect of personification on this poem! ! ! Such comments are helpful to me.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 11:53:10 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I like this Susan...am not one to read Senryu 's but yours is wonderful. Can totally picture this...Kinda like maybe your husband out riding horseback in the moonlight. If this is your first attempt - well you aced it for sure. You have immense talent and there is no better place to be to share it than right here for the whole world to see. Poemhunter is blessed to have you. My husband has read all of your poetry as well...and he totally agrees with me. There have been very few here that has even caught his eye.