Love Is An Illusion Poem by Trenton watson

Love Is An Illusion

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Love is an illusion,
All i see,
Are broken hearts,
In front of me,
Love is cupids dart,
Untill the arrow breaks,
Another broken heart,
Then the system breaks
Love is in the air,
Because the bonds are still there,
Untill cupid's dart goes elsewhere.


(Ask me if u can borrow but i made it D :)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hannah Adams 12 October 2009

Its short, insightful, and precise in your perspective! This is honestly a really graet poem! I liked th ryming flow! ! !

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Kym Toohey 12 October 2009

Trenton... tis a sad event to see one so young with dim view on love... yet I would say to you it was not love that was the illusion. The illusion was in the beholder who thought they stood in the light of love, though the reality was, they stood in the candle light of another who turned their back and left the other in their shadows. It's a good thing to light your own candle then try not to turn your back on those who are important to you. Cheers mate.

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Trenton watson

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Livingston parish Louisiana
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