Love Is Commotion Poem by Ankita Sharma

Love Is Commotion



Just let me sing to you in the commotion of love
The angels are laughing away,
As the stars die above
My fingers are red and my heart is all blue
I would have disturbed the world, if not for you
The bells are tingling out of fear of a terrified tiger
A flower bursts into the blossoms of a sea
A woman turns out to be as nice as can be
The atmosphere burns the heavenly heart
It's a land where developed hearts don't dance,
And undeveloped hearts gallop into a trance
And as my eyes open, the hearts of blunders stray away
From a chapter that is as long and lonely as my little life
The magnitude of mirth runs away before
Anyone has anytime to catch anybody at all
Yet, love isn't impossible
As day fades into day and night barks into night,
I love a life that's living me, and oh I feel so right!
Beginning on a laughing day and ending on the fright of night,
I feel I'm flying far away, and love is out of sight
I am raising two hands as only my left foot stands
One hand's for the sun, another has a gun
My mouth and all is devouring fun, and the victim tries to run
Enough enough enough
I'll love you if you turn away, you'll hate yourself if you don't
The weather and the wires worked, and my love was left unstoned
As the wind woke up and won the world
I discovered that life has a wife called laughter, and it is pregnant with love
As the victim ran away and threw himself into a river,
Dead souls seemed to ask the river to laugh with them forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarvesh Kulkarni 16 March 2010

this is an amazing poem. very different from the many i have read here. intense, and structured. it has a hauntingh feel about it. 'As day fades into day and night barks into night, ' loved this line. thank you so much.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 14 March 2010

Hey Ankita.....i read this poem not just once...but three times to get the full essence of it.....interestingly this aspect of love has been rarely poeticised.....well it feels good to be the first one....good luck...i like ur work.

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