Love Lost Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN
Love Lost
Like a netted sea-nymph
In a fisherman's ship once sailed.
When danced on his bosom deck,
Died-before reaching the shore.
Lost the illumination of pupils
And became a burning comet
In heart's horizon.
wow, luvely, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , very beautiful.........indeed.
Great imagery, love lost expressed in metaphorical manner 'became a burning comet / in heart's horizon'.A never ending horizon as a never ending unforgettable love..Cristina Teodor
Fascinating imagery for lost, heartbroken love. Wow. Very interesting. It seems a good depiction from start to its never-forgotten finish. Excellent.
I've written something with a similar title. Ha, perhaps great mind think alike, no?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 7:02:50 PM # 1.0.0.1119
When danced on his bosom deck, Died-before reaching the shore. There is ample scope to interpret the poem. The imagery used here makes anyone's heart to ponder over.... The metaphor employed here is incandescent. It just took me to hallucination where I my mind displayed the text written by Earnest Hemingway in his noble award-winning OLD MAN AND SEA. loud Cheers dear Vipins!