Love Me Till Eternity Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Love Me Till Eternity

Rating: 5.0


I find your love
Among the groovy grass,
The newspaper clippings,
slippery soap flakes,
And speckled mosaic

I find your name
Inscribed on the tea strainer,
Level crossings, straw flower
And on the wedding band
Paint box, slice of mango

I heard your whispers
Among the whistling marmot
Angel falls, African violet
In sweet sultan, the wild oats
Midnight sun and skipping rope

Come to me darling everyday
In butterfly rays, wine i sip,
In the sentences incomplete,
In words unspoken,
In tears unshed
In moments passed by
And love me till eternity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shimon Weinroth 29 October 2008

lovely metaphors demanding more, love as a process without an ending, well presented10 but you say till eternity which is limited how about for all eternity cheers shimon

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Sadiqullah Khan 24 October 2008

Come to me darling everyday In butterfly rays, wine i sip, In the sentences incomplete, In words unspoken, In tears unshed In moments passed by And love me till eternity unforgettable words, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , many 10s

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 23 October 2008

I LOVE READING SUCH HOPELESS LOVE POEMS... PEOPLE CALL THEM HOPELESS BUT THE TRUTH IS THEY ARE THE ENLIGHTENMENT OF HOPE, THE WITNESSES OF PURE PERSISTENT LOVE... :)

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Seema Aarella 21 October 2008

the strong presense of his...being felt in the surroundings in almost every beautiful thing! hope he keeps coming to u in as many ways!

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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