Palas Kumar Ray

(India)

Love N Hatred


When you say you Love
Father n Mother
Brother n Sister
Son n Daughter
Him and Her
I see you lie.
Whom you actually Love
is always ' I '


When you say you Hate
Father n Mother
Brother n Sister
Son n Daughter
Him and Her
I see you lie.
Whom you actually Hate
is always ' I '






© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved.

Submitted: Thursday, June 12, 2008
Edited: Saturday, June 07, 2014

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  • Paige Galloway (10/14/2008 11:03:00 AM)

    I agree with you, this is true. Its not others that life begins with. Changing feelings alway begins with you.
    10! (Report) Reply

  • Reetesh Sabr (9/29/2008 9:54:00 AM)

    it takes us inside to peek within
    can't resist to be ur fan dada

    Indeed, Improvement begins with an 'I' (Report) Reply

  • Greenwolfe 1962 (8/26/2008 1:01:00 PM)

    This is great poetry and a wonderful jewel. I have chose it as a favorite of mine.
    This is a special writing by a special writer.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Kesav Easwaran (6/21/2008 5:37:00 AM)

    although mathematically imaginary phiolsophically real the 'i' is always there....constant. the others as palas tells us are all temporary...a good poetic vision (Report) Reply

  • Onelia Avelar (6/13/2008 5:08:00 AM)

    You mean the self loving and self hating, the omnipresent Ego, yes? Whatever you mean, the poem is well written, with a good rhythm...and a true insight after all... (Report) Reply

  • Vidi Writes (6/12/2008 12:43:00 PM)

    Its this contrast
    keeps us in confusion
    Its this confusion
    keeps us perplexed
    How to come out of this
    love and hatred relation with self?

    You have shot at the right point
    Making your readers to scratch and grasp.

    Very well composed. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Sumita Datta (6/12/2008 9:31:00 AM)

    What you have written... that people will dare to write... i liked this piece of work... :) (Report) Reply

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