! ! ! ! ! ! ! * Love Of Grace *! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
! ! ! ! ! ! ! * Love Of Grace *! ! ! ! ! ! !
Quest of moon ruffles the ocean
Betides thrill reeling through waves
Images riffle by queries of ocean
Promise when holds truth by reality.
Colors of rainbow never baffle blue
as gleams of light enlighten shadow
truth eternal bestows beauty of marvel
does sun love tears of sparkling dew?
sweet words of silhouette when whisper
feeling bespeaks beyond space and time
love eternal is mortal true by resilience
never being burden of shadow crunching tears
love excels by assimilation
soul transcends by love of grace
never yet bleeds by pricks of roses
as mystified entirety in communion.
a blazing of glory of oneness in continuum
semblance of unification of own gods
when mingling tones mutter all in unison
onto the end of eternity by resplendent..
The sturucture and the imagery are very excellent, but may I say, I had to read this twice, as I wasnt sure I was following the same path as you had written, it was very good none the less, and if that was your intent, then the poem is very good... Bonnie
Wonder write, But I Like these lines most: love eternal is mortal true by resilience never being burden of shadow crunching tears
Really your writing is baffling, I was delightful by reading it.
very poetic and beautiful, well written and a good read thank you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 5:23:10 AM # 1.0.0.1119
The imagery and structure is great! Great work! It kind of bothers me that you stopped capitilizing words halfway through it. But it's nothing I can't get over.