Love Or Hate Poem by louis rams

Love Or Hate

Rating: 4.6


so many children in this world
so many little boys and girls
going without food or love
this is'nt what god expected of us.

children are a blessed gift from god
thats how you and i got our start.
take your time and look at a child
let their innocence love fill your heart

then find their innocence and beauty within
for we are all born with first man's sin.

they was taught this at an early start
they was taught that they was different
and better than others.
and no other race.
are your sisters and brothers

don't fill your heart with bitterness and hate,
make the change in yoursef before its too late.
don't let it consume and steal your soul
for in the long run my friend, it will take its toll.

we have to show them that what
they was taught is wrong
and in this world it does'nt belong.

it is time to take a stand
so give of yourself all that you can.
you see hatred should be a thing of the past
while love and faith are the things that will last.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Pandey 30 January 2009

great message in this beatiful poem.. 10

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Perfect... You are so right in this poem. very strong and real. I hate thinking about children going without food I wish i could help them all but like most americans I am so poor myself and trying to raise my daughter.. This poem makes wonderful points and I enjoyed reading it.. Thank you Krista

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brother, you nailed it on the head

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