Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,822 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Love Plants - Poem by Aftab Alam

O my heart, where thou keepeth
The love plants? : A beating garden
That sprouts throu’ mouth and hand
Throu’ the pearly lovely eyes
And the feeling, at my surprise
I hope, they are mutant, the love plants
Ever changing the form as per requirement
When there is no change
Plant grows at some range
And became matured and fixed
I have felt through my sense
Beyond any restriction or fence
Wife and husband at some time far
Seems me, a brother and sister at par


Comments about Love Plants by Aftab Alam

  • Rookie - 1 Points Litan Dey (8/5/2013 4:34:00 AM)

    Strong thinking...its nice to read (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,251 Points Patricia Grantham (7/6/2013 10:21:00 PM)

    A garden of love plants. Plants like love
    have to be watered and nurtured to grow.
    Once they have this they will begin to reach
    toward the sunlight and wind themselves
    through holes in fences. Lovely write Honorable
    Poet.! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,663 Points Hazel Durham (6/22/2013 7:38:00 AM)

    Great lines with beautiful imagery! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,467 Points Unwritten Soul (6/21/2013 11:18:00 PM)

    But distance never exist for love to be extended in any places! Hmmm lovely write Alam..._SOul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (6/21/2013 1:12:00 PM)

    wife and husband at some time far- -seems me a brother and sister at par. so often this is the case. good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (6/21/2013 7:52:00 AM)

    A beating garden of love plants, kool. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, June 21, 2013


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