Love Poem Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Love Poem

Rating: 4.8


Heart bespoken hour.
My love a flower.
Entwined passioned love.
Fluttering like a dove.
Heartbeats skip time.
Our love, heavens rhyme.
Golden crested sunrise.
Stare into my eye's.
Endless our love's pace.
Shrouded by Lilly lace.

5/2/09 POEWHIT

JESUS SAVES

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 02 May 2009

lovely write Joe...simply flows....Fi 10 +++

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Ency Bearis 02 May 2009

great write...meaningful....10

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Rommel Mark Marchan 02 May 2009

no pyrotechniques perfect use of simile yoy are great metaphorical poet

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Meggie Gultiano 02 May 2009

oh, what a lovely write here, Joe

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Tsira Goge 02 May 2009

Shrouded by Lilly lace. ....................................... It's very nice... 10... Tsira

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 October 2009

‘Shrouded by Lilly lace’ Exuberance emotion! Enjoyed to it's true core. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Milica Franchi De Luri 08 September 2009

This is a beautiful love poem............ i love the metaphor ' My love is a flower'

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Mark Curtis 10 June 2009

very clever to use the 'My love a flower' and relate it to the lilly in the end...

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Pandian Angelina 02 May 2009

Endless our love's pace., , , very true The journey of love is never ending It is never alone for My love is a flower. Entwined with passioned love. Wonderful dignified expression Of true love which is ever eternal!

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Saadat Tahir 02 May 2009

Endless our love's pace. Shrouded by Lilly lace. very very nice....great similitude and imaginings cheers

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