The flower needs sun as I need you
my love is burning bright and true
your touch I yearn when we’re apart
I need you feed my beating heart
You’re in the eager air I breathe, your
eyes in shining stars from skies above,
your smile a warming summer breeze
which melts the coldest heart with love.
Your absence is a day of dismal view
but sunshine always springs from you
my cloudy days you put to easy flight
my melancholy brightened with your light.
Dedicated to all the lovely ladies out there.
Thanks to Ivan Donn Carswell for the revision
this is much better! i did enjoi the revised version more.. but it seems a diffrent poem more than a revision. i love a few stanzas that particularly stood out. 'Your absence is a day of dismal view but sunshine always springs from you ' and 'your touch I yearn when we’re apart I need you feed my beating heart ' it was a fresh and spun view of your poem and i loved it. good night, love love
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this poem is so graceful..well written..like a classic lovestory