Love's Fortune Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

Love's Fortune

Rating: 4.5


I was merry not, in two was I,
And round the clock I wondered why.
So free I did what man should do,
Forget the bitch and start anew.

You know of this how boughs can break
How rivers run, how worlds can shake.
And as you told me to before,
'Goodbye, ' I said, to love once more.

Now free, I thought what life should be,
When came your love to rescue me.
Though lost in love as I was then,
Loves once fulfilled don't yearn again.

With you I make my time and seed,
Fortold by you the love I need.
And that I know, for I can say,
I'm fortune blessed you came my way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian X 01 June 2008

Great theme, and your rhythm rolls very smoothly.

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Maxim Muyu 08 June 2008

nice flow and the it has that nice taste that you need to read again and again.

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Bianca B. 20 June 2008

wow nice i like it. I cant believe it but i get so emmoyional when i read your poems this is the second day im crying

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Ozzy Govea 21 June 2008

Keep writing! I really like your work! !

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Anam Rizvi 15 July 2008

There's something so sweet about your work that one can only feel it and yet not put one's finger on it. The soft lyrical touch or maybe the innocence of true love makles the reader want to go on. Thank you.

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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

With you I make my time and seed, Fortold by you the love I need. Rachel Ann Butler

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Cristy Upshaw 03 June 2009

I am finding writes that are you, but a different side of you. affection well conveyed within you words.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 21 October 2008

The flow of words are so smooth that the poem sooths the reasers

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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 September 2008

A melodious lovely poem on love. Love is the core desire of human being, a basic need, an art, a spore of art, a dream, a hope, and what not. I love it, it's lyrical flow. Bravo.

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Sw33t Girl 02 September 2008

wow! Such a great piece! I fell in love with it!

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