Love's Perspectives Poem by Pure Remedy

Love's Perspectives



Her View:
laying here trying to communicate with medititation
filtering my thoughs of future conversations
Trying to decompose any retaliation
And run away from humiliation
Disburst the truth unfold your lies
You've shown no remorse for my sudden cries
'Woman you have lied! '
I am to scared to walk back
Yet too scared to sleep alone
you are my shadow I can't leave you alone

My View:
I'm not going to function off the past
leaving you saturated in your injuries
I have caused
My biggest creation made by my flaws
We are: intense, our light is dense, do not let our love dispense
I will give you fresh quality of loveology
My purposal is exposed to have fewer apologies
There was never a laugh
Only us playing with tear gas
We are not a crumbled piece of paper
I am your closest neighbor
I present to thee with this ring
Asking for you to remember me
10-21-2008,2: 49 am
I'm laying here trying to communicate with meditation
Filtering my thoughts of future conversations
But are we in progress or are we delaying?

copyrights 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stacey Watts 23 October 2008

Another piece full of romance and beautiful.. Ahh to relay thoughts this way is a very sensual way.. Great read. You are very talented.

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