Love.....Save Me This Day Poem by Debora Johnson

Love.....Save Me This Day

Rating: 5.0


Swirling, Swirling turning through time
Day becomes night without any sign

in the blink of an eye, joy slips to pain
Sunshine slithers with dark clouds of rain

Thorns abound hiding roses of gold
Love...she is there in stories of old

Dreaming, dreaming deep down within
My soul cries out, won't you come in?

Shrivling, drowning, crumbling away
I beg you and beg you, save me this day

So much to give, my heart it bleeds
Have I comitted some crime, a terrible deed?

Understanding may come, I must believe true
I wait and I wait, surrendering to you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 17 January 2009

This is just a wonderful poem. The kind of rhythm and rhyme I love. I picked a good one to read. Congratulations! ! ! GW62

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John Smith 17 January 2009

Wow! Simply stunning. Amazing rhythm and flow. A definite ten!

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Debora Johnson

Debora Johnson

Zanesville, Ohio
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