Love Struck Poem by Rayven Forrest

Love Struck

Rating: 5.0


You hold my heart in your hand
And I don't fully think you understand
How much you mean to me.
You are my soul mate, my best friend, my life line link.
The way you look at me
It makes me love struck and weak.
Your touch makes my skin crawl
Your voice gives me the chills and I can barely stay focus to think.
You hold the key to my heart
It's up to you to continue this love or not.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Warmest regards Akmal

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Mele Kaufusi 05 July 2011

Amazing! No question at all! This definitely deserves a 10! :)

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