hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 53,114 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Love To Whisper - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

If you can lend me your ears
Listen carefully and hear
I would love to whisper
Gently for no other listener

I was in confusion
With so many questions
How to put and present?
Exactly same way I felt

Not swords along can win
Not words alone can adore the scene
I have experienced it since
I want no words to mince

It reveals no secret
Yes bit makes it to let
My love for you has remained unknown
I want it to happen

I visit barren land
And find flowers at dead end
But that too look friendly
As if to show love readily

I have only one desire
To speak you very clear
That I need your support
To anchor at the safe port

That shall give friendship call
It will demolish unfriendly wall
I shall be called one of the luckiest
Ever known to any one as closest


Comments about Love To Whisper by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/28/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    Very well said, friendship wall can demolish the unfriendly wall....Beautiful poem..Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2013 10:15:00 AM)

    A decent poem


    Gareth Jones3 minutes ago
    But there a few wording errors, but certainly a good flow and meaning.
    Comment +1
    Hidden feelings (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2013 10:14:00 AM)

    Jenepher Lane3 minutes ago
    This writer seems to have hidden feelings for someone. I like his perspective. I hope that someday he can tell the person he feels this way about. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2013 10:13:00 AM)

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  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2013 10:11:00 AM)

    f you can lend me your ears
    Listen carefully and hear (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 29, 2013


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