Noreen Carden

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Love Undone - Poem by Noreen Carden

Rosie walks down by the river bank flowers in her hair,
Stars in her eyes
She dreams of the day that will soon come to pass
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Just a little poem i wrote a long time ago

Comments about Love Undone by Noreen Carden

  • Chinedu Dike (10/31/2014 2:21:00 PM)

    A narrative romantic tragedy well articulated, and nicely written to capture the essence of the story. A case of tragedy in the bliss of love. It's a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Wake Up! Wake Up! (6/4/2014 6:57:00 PM)

    WOW! ! ! I love it, what a wet twist! (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Brick Daniel Brick (5/8/2014 12:34:00 PM)

    This the epitome of Romantic Love, which not only triumphs over death (that's a given in Western culture) but also over the compromises of ordinary life. The reunion of the lovers at the end (whether it is a dream or a reality is irrelevant - it's triumph of the spirit) is a satisfying dramatic closing. I re-read Keat's EVE OF ST. AGNES a couple of months ago - when my city was locked in a bitter winter just like the castle in the poem. Poems like Keats's and yours are so refreshing to the troubled human spirit. They celebrate what is best in us. (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (4/5/2014 8:37:00 PM)

    this makes me feel like driving to the ocean and slipping neath the waters. i wonder who i hear calling my name. hmmm? how long ago, i wonder. thanks for sharing. there seemed to be a little rhyming going on, though it wasn't real obvious.
    of course, if he'd been a REAL man, like me, he would have run away with rosie; his father and his fortune be damned.............NOT!
    bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (1/20/2014 3:59:00 AM)

    A very well written tragic love song, with a lovely ending... they met for ever.
    ...... truly a heart touching penning.

    Incidentally, today is my birth day, feeling very lonely, I dedicated this poem to my loved (An angel in the night) - you may read (Report) Reply

  • John Brown John Brown (11/11/2013 7:32:00 AM)

    This poem reminds me of 'The Lady of Shalott' and I like it. You've missed out a word in the first line of the second verse though Noreen: 'she would be his'? (Report) Reply

  • Andrew Blakemore (10/31/2013 9:01:00 AM)

    From sadness there comes joy, excellent work. (Report) Reply

  • Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (10/2/2013 10:17:00 AM)

    Perhaps one should learn that when love calls it best to lose a partial than the all. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (9/29/2013 10:36:00 PM)

    Beautifully written and very touching. A sad poem that turned
    tragedy into happiness. Lovers met again forever. I have a poem
    If We Ever Meet Again. Please stop by when you get a chance. I
    really do appreciate your comments on my poems. Regards. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (9/25/2013 11:37:00 AM)

    a great ending to the poem. enjoyed (Report) Reply

  • marvin brato (9/24/2013 10:58:00 PM)

    Quite a love story, very emotional.Liked it! (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (9/23/2013 11:09:00 AM)

    I am tempted to repeat David Wood's appropriate comment: Poetic justice served well! (Report) Reply

  • Lucifera Santez Lucifera Santez (9/22/2013 12:25:00 PM)

    a tragedy written with such beautiful words.
    amazing.
    please read some of my poems and comment.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George Valsa George (9/22/2013 5:03:00 AM)

    A sad tale poignantly narrated! The course of true love never runs smooth! ! (Report) Reply

  • David Wood David Wood (9/21/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    Poetic justice served well. A lovely story. (Report) Reply

  • Lorraine Colon (9/20/2013 4:32:00 PM)

    Great story. Very entertaining. I liked the ending. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham Hazel Durham (9/20/2013 10:59:00 AM)

    A wonderful write with a great story so beautifully written! (Report) Reply

  • Dave Walker (9/20/2013 6:16:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem, a great ending. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (9/19/2013 5:43:00 PM)

    a good read, enjoyed (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (9/19/2013 1:03:00 PM)

    Oh poignant....it such cruel feeling then comes the sweet write...loved it_Soul (Report) Reply










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