ramesh rai

Gold Star - 17,730 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Love Without Pain - Poem by ramesh rai

Fire is unexpected without smoke
Love is also unexpected without pain
If love is fire then pain is smoke
Smoke is the realization of fire
Pain is also the realization of love
Fire is the coincidence of two objects
Love is also coincidence of two hearts
Soul is free from pains and pleasures
Mind can only understand the pains and pleasures
But heart can feel the pains and pleasures
May be throughout life
Love of one’s is not understood
But isolation of the beloved one
Makes us the realization of one love
Love is the natural phenomenon like fire
Life without love is a barren land
Fire sometimes burns to ashes
Love also sometimes makes the life to ashes
If life is delighted due to love
Surrounding is also enlightened due to fire
But when love and fire comes together
Fire is extinguished due to love of a beloved one


Comments about Love Without Pain by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 7,744 Points Hazel Durham (3/19/2013 8:05:00 AM)

    So true and so beautifully expressed with great imagery! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 31 Points Jinal Oswal (11/25/2011 4:42:00 AM)

    Love and fire compared so well... Nice write :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Vp Ramesan (11/15/2011 3:07:00 AM)

    Equating love with fire is a realastic tone in the Poem, Love imbibe fire, but fire never imbibe love. Love creates a spring where as fire creates a grave. congrats (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,531 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (11/14/2011 3:34:00 AM)

    wow this is true
    love and pain are inseparable but pain could be taken in easily as long as love will be more powerful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nick Daveiga (11/11/2011 1:08:00 AM)

    Love this one,

    Fire is the coincidence of two objects
    Love is also coincidence of two hearts
    Soul is free from pains and pleasures
    Mind can only understand the pains and pleasures
    But heart can feel the pains and pleasures

    omg... that was clean <3 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 249 Points Vipins Puthooran (11/6/2011 5:25:00 AM)

    Love is like fire, ,
    I enjoy this poem; a good one
    And that metaphor! ! ! well written! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 5, 2011



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