(09/28/90 / okc)

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Loved The Sea.

Once ago I loved the sea
And as I did, it loved me
But I found another love for me
And she became my bride to be
We were as happy as can be
Unlike my old love, the sea
She was meant for me
But she did not like it that sea
So she sent a storm for me
But got my bride to be
I must love the sea
Or it will keep coming after me
That evil sea
She is happy that sea
As happy as me
When I had my bride to be
I’ll never be
Happy as can be
When my bride to be
Is with that evil sea

Submitted: Sunday, June 25, 2006
Edited: Wednesday, August 11, 2010


Comments about this poem (Loved The Sea. by leo conway )

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  • Vidyadhar-2 ..... (6/12/2008 8:14:00 PM)

    It has imagery and story too.....nicely written

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  • Scribbler Girl (11/24/2007 2:03:00 AM)

    It has a good rhythm-its a little sad but I like it

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