Lovely Place As Heaven Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Lovely Place As Heaven



We appreciate the roses
And suppose
To be in possession
We think in terms of narrow relation

We see different colors
Shining with peals and adores
How love and smell they scatter?
We are influenced and feel better

The world has remained skeptical
Suspicious and distrustful
Flowers they like but possession!
They all live with obsession

If they could see beauty in children
The love and tenderness in woman
The world would have been different
So beautiful to feel and live with at present

Only ladies represent flowers
Roses are real symbol of lovers
We must seek same to happen
With feeling of lovely place as heaven

Lovely Place As Heaven
Thursday, December 25, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 December 2014

We appreciate the roses And suppose

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 25 December 2014

A nice poem with nice scenery so beautiful and we search thanks for share

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 December 2014

Re: Lovely place as heaven (Score: 1) by NahilaCsemaJ on Sunday, December 28,2014 (23: 34: 50) This poem was well worth the time to rate it. Every word paints the bitter truth while the last line gives hope. This is not the first poem I have read of yours and I look forward to many others. Best Regards, NahilaCsemaJ

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 December 2014

Re: Lovely place as heaven (Score: 1) by omegapaf on Sunday, December 28,2014 (16: 07: 03) a rose by any other name would smell as sweet - william shakespeare. love the line only ladies represent flowers - paul and poetic pup.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 December 2014

I really like the last stanza 1 hour ago by Chloe Brink to Lovely place as heaven

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 December 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 December 2014

Well discovered lovely place of heaven from core of heart. Beautiful poem ever composed on festive session. The world and different colours make this special. 25 Dec by Mantu Mahakul to Lovely place as heaven

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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