Loves Eternity Poem by Crimson Love

Loves Eternity

Rating: 5.0


We fall into this bottomless pit of love,
forever falling, and forever loving the feeling,
Totally immersed in one another,
Never letting go for fear of dying,
Without you my soul has no reason to be,
Were the ones whom love will last eternity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
(De Va) 01 December 2011

A very good write...... Vivek - we fall in love bc we have a feeling of free fall in the decent into the emotion...haha...well, maybe not..bc we also have a euphoric feeling as well and that is a high...blessings

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Stefanie Fontker 18 September 2011

I think this is my favourite of yours so far, but that keeps on changing, haha. Great poetry, very emotional and touching.

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Vipins Puthooran 18 September 2011

The high-light of your poems are love and that's in a new style. I like this one.

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Vivek Haldar 18 September 2011

kuch samajh me nahi aya...: D

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Vivek Haldar 18 September 2011

nice poem i have a question..why do we fall in love? why don't we rise in love? : (

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