Loves Secret Code Poem by Biff McGuire

Loves Secret Code

Rating: 5.0


How do I find that special key?
To the side of you I most long to see?
Is it cut from a metal known only by few?
On a die that the gods made especially for you?

Is it set with a timer I can't figure out?
With a labyrinth hiding the simplest route.
Through your eyes, I see that side of you
and feel that I want to be part of it to.

Is it only from me, that it hides and eludes?
or have other men witnessed mysterious moods
Like a heart that is happy, when taking a chance,
then walking away and refusing the dance.

Avoiding to long; all the needs and desire,
and dousing the embers, extinguish the fire

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Composed well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A dream of the judgement day' on page 1. Akmal

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Biff McGuire

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Salt lake City, Utah U.S.A
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