Loving Dark Wind Poem by anna E

Loving Dark Wind

Rating: 4.5


oh how the wind blows oh so free, but i love you. Secretly i hold.
The wind flows though my hair and fills me with new life.

But the wind it tears down the earth with just a breath. The wind changes and never stand still in one place.

The fear in my eyes, seeing that the wind will never be peaceful.

i hide in a cave, try to get away from your power. oh.... but how i love this dark wind.

Come, See. For this is you.Never will this be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
wild forest- E- 01 January 2010

thank you oh so very much! ! !

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A nice one...fully imaginating....and forcing the reader to imagine ur situation... U've portrayed abt wind and its quality very well...

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Marieta Maglas 21 December 2009

nice visual metaphor But the wind it tears down the earth with just a breath nice meditative poem 10

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