Low Poem by Tessa Eichhorst

Low

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I don't know if you've
noticed, but I'm confused
by almost everything you do.
I thought all was great, but
I'm lost in thoughts; I don't
know what to do about this crush
I've wrought.

You have me feeling low, confused,
and stressed out. I don't really know
if truth is coming out of your mouth.
This is the worst I've felt in
awhile, my mind's all mixed up, and
my heart's more confused. I know
how I feel for you, but are your
feelings true?

We may have started out great, but
I don't know if we've ended. This
low feeling I have can't go on
forever; I won't let it. If only I
understood what's in your heart
and head. If only this could
be figured out, and I wouldn't
be so mixed up.

We may not quite understand each other,
but things don't have to be so hard.
Too bad this feeling isn't gone;
shaken from my mind, maybe then
I could tell apart truths and lies.
I may not be what you want, need, or
who you even could ever care for like
I do you. Please stop making
me feel this low and breaking my
already frail heart two.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 29 March 2005

lovely poem, this haiku inspired by your work: old love meeting her today with an old smile

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