Lower Leaf Is Falling Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Lower Leaf Is Falling

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While lower leaf is falling down
Upper leaf is giggling at the rate.
Due to pale yellow colour it happens
Aging has left marks on lower leaf.

Branches tie them up but no help
We do not know when lower falls
Upper leaf is newly grown sure
Now maturity is far to keep in lap.

Natural processes can never bend
We have to see what happens here
Time is sure powerful as this is true
Every leaf who comes down has to fall.

Who can hold this in right age? tell,
We have to maintain the flow eagerly
There is no alternative we feel sure
Lower leaf is falling and upper has to.

Sunday, November 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 01 November 2015

And life goes on this earth....new will come old will leave....Awesome poem, Sir.

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Pushpendra Patel 15 October 2020

Lower leaf falls down and new leaf arises. This is a nice process of nature.

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Valsa George 07 April 2019

Nature has certain norms! All that is born should fall and decay! Usually the lower leaf may be the first to drop as it ages faster than the lately added leaves! With age, weakening begins to show on the body and the aged ones are the first to die. But if a wind comes, the healthy green leaves also may fall! The time of fall cannot be predicted, but sure, everything has to fall! Enjoyed how you established this truth with an example from Nature!

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Sanjukta Nag 02 November 2015

Circle of life is brilliantly portrayed with wise diction. Thank you.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 November 2015

'Natural processes'; with respect to nature.

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Loke Kok Yee 01 November 2015

nature will takes its course-10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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