Lucid Dreams Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Lucid Dreams

Rating: 4.9


A ricochet of thoughts
running through my head
in these lucid dreams
I've always Had

Thoughts of the living
Thoughts of the dead
all merge together
leaving me not knowing
who is alive
and who is dead

When I wake up
the thoughts come flooding back
as I see the bruises
where they grabbed me and said
don't go back

Only then do I know
who is living
and who is dead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 12 March 2012

Dreams often seem so real until we wake up. Dead v alive, real v unreal. Good poem.

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Tarrakkul the Gazzel 08 March 2012

I like this poem, it is very meaningful, and the writing is excellent. Great Job!

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dude u r really awesome.. loved ur style of writing

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Wahab Abdul 08 March 2012

THIS IS REALLY GREAT, YOU R TOO MUCH TALENTED, THE WAY YOU PENNED THE POEM IS REALLY PRAISE WORTHY, WELL WORDED, A WELL CRAFTED POEM INDEED, I LIKE THE POEM AS YOU LIKE IT. PLEASE READ MY POEM, I WANT TO DIE’’

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Carl Carl 08 March 2012

This is a great poem because it sounds just like its real... it painted a great picture in my head... I'm only 18 and only started writing poems about 2 days ago plus today... This was great site to go to... keep up the good work... plan to read more of your poems

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awesome really gr8 work... choice of words are really inspiring.. thanks for sharing

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Smoky Hoss 18 March 2012

Carl Jung once stated: Life is a luminous pause between two great mysteries, which themselves are one. I believe you have touched upon that here; where we're from, where we are going, where we are. Good poem.

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Louise Crielly 18 March 2012

wow i could some what realte to this

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Cheung Shun Sang 15 March 2012

5 stars is my choices to celebrate youir Lucid dreams

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Cheung Shun Sang 15 March 2012

Ricochet dreams do reflect the mat6ters by dreams.Who is alive and who is die. Only death is killed then the discrimations become great. I am cheung shun sang or call me cauchy3. i come for your previous calls. Thanks for the attentions.Good lucks

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