Lunar Might - Ii Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Lunar Might - Ii

Rating: 5.0


Polished eyes mirror your
might Your glow; I come
only, As you go

You, the centre I float
on the circumference From
you I draw my significance

Imported light, poor plight
Belittled in my own eyes
I search

A moment of strength, when millions Change
their point of reference
I overshadow

Your glare, obstructed
Dark world below
Like a magician, I hold the show

In a moment of pride; It’s my joyride
Enough to say;
every moon has its day.

(Rewritten with the help and guidance of a Poet Friend, Mr.Ronald Peat.)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 29 July 2009

The first one was more detailed, i dont think it really needed a part two it was pretty good being a part one :) but this was as well thought out and written Nicely done

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Rakesh Bedi 29 July 2009

Like a magician i hold the show....; goon one, nikunj!

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Lady Grace 30 July 2009

'In a moment of pride; It’s my joyride Enough to say; every moon has its day'...yes, u r right..and everyday has a moon...

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Annabel Sheila 19 August 2009

Very well crafted poem! I loved the beautiful flow of your words. Amazing.... Anna

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Mamta Agarwal 06 August 2009

Yes, moon stole the thunder oops, light from the Sun. lunar might indeed. good one Mamta

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it has the essence of poetry within. nice.

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Indira Babbellapati 30 July 2009

yes, every moon has its night!

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Anjali Sinha 30 July 2009

yeh so very true every moon has to have its day lovely poem dear Nikunj -10 anjali

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