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Polished eyes mirror your
might Your glow; I come
only, As you go
You, the centre I float
on the circumference From
you I draw my significance
Imported light, poor plight
Belittled in my own eyes
I search
A moment of strength, when millions Change
their point of reference
I overshadow
Your glare, obstructed
Dark world below
Like a magician, I hold the show
In a moment of pride; It's my joyride
Enough to say;
every moon has its day.
(Rewritten with the help and guidance of a Poet Friend, Mr.Ronald Peat.)
Nikunj Sharma
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Wednesday, July 29, 2009 |
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Wednesday, May 18, 2011 |
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Comments about this poem (Lunar Might - II
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Nikunj Sharma
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Annabel Sheila (8/19/2009 8:37:00 AM)
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Very well crafted poem! I loved the beautiful flow of your words. Amazing....
Anna
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Mamta Agarwal (8/6/2009 6:36:00 AM)
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Yes, moon stole the thunder oops, light from the Sun. lunar might indeed.
good one
Mamta
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Anjali Sinha (7/30/2009 1:10:00 AM)
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yeh so very true
every moon has to have its day
lovely poem dear Nikunj
-10 anjali
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Lady Grace (7/30/2009 12:21:00 AM)
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'In a moment of pride; It’s my joyride Enough to say; every moon has its day'...yes, u r right..and everyday has a moon...
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Rakesh Bedi (7/29/2009 9:59:00 PM)
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Like a magician i hold the show....; goon one, nikunj!
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Sara H (7/29/2009 7:56:00 PM)
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The first one was more detailed,
i dont think it really needed a part two
it was pretty good being a part one :)
but this was as well thought out and written
Nicely done
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