Lyn Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Lyn

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Lyn! How are you now, Lyn?
Wonder which world you tread now!
What your fleeting mind keeps thinking,
Who your blurred eyes keep searching,
What thoughts do make you grin, for a while?

Oh! This was not what ought to be!
How extra ordinary you were, oh really!
With the mind and merit, you surpassed
All others in caring, comforting and serving
The critically ill, like an angel in white.

As a bolt from the blue, your brain got a clot,
A quick surgery just set it right and quite fast
You were recovering, to everybody's delight.
But alas! Everything was undone! An abrupt
Attack of Encephalitis sent you to a coma again!

Since then, as if the load of the earth descended
On your tiny head, to confine you to a wheelchair.
Epileptic attacks brought forth convulsions in series,
Tearing your tender self, bruising you from the falls,
So quickly an angel of love became just a living body!

It was just by chance that I saw you that day, lying
On a hospital bed, awake but in a trance. Seeing your
Old doctor lovingly touching your head, you smiled,
Said 'sorry' as you thought your hair was greasy, untidy,
Even in a trance you pulled the right senses to apologize!

Standing beside, was your dear mom and beloved hubby,
Their eyes blank with despondency, worries staring galore.
In such a sad situation the kind doctor had to break
The unkind truth. Days ahead will be worse, chances of
Recovery remote. You will fade into a memory, by and by.

I was an witness to that unfortunate debriefing.
As I was hearing the doctor, I was also praying,
To God, Who Holds the key to all the closed doors,
That may He Descend on earth and Open the door
To recovery for Lyn. For Him, nothing is a closed chapter.

May Lyn come back to us, with her trade mark smile,
May she again stand on her feet, move from bed to bed,
Take care of her patients who she loves and adores,
Inquire about their families, as she always did before.
May our Florence Nightingale be back with us again!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On a sad April afternoon, I met Lyn by chance at a hospital while I was accompanying the doctor who treated her. Her sad history of illness moved me. She was just about thirty, a charming nurse. Today, by the fits of irony, she is nurse dependent herself and likely to be so for ever. Whenever I remember that afternoon, my heart feels heavy. May God in His Infinite Mercy forgive her and return to her, her normal life!

Aditmari, Lalmonirhat.
Bangladesh.
03 August 2013
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 19 October 2018

(cont.) somehow your name is not on my list of PH friends! ! or are my eyes failing as well as my brian, ...i mean brain? ? ! i've tried to put you back into list, but PH is giving me trouble, & NOT JUST in this way! ! ; ( but...it IS free. bri :)

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Khairul Ahsan 15 January 2019

I have added your name to 'My Friends' list.

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Bri Edwards 19 October 2018

sometimes, on PH, i think my mind must be getting ' 'numb'! ! ! ! i see i commented extensively earlier this year, yet i don't recall the poem, nor commenting. oh well! i DO remember my name, though i often type it brain instead of brian on my 'first attempt'! ! (cont.)

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Khairul Ahsan 15 January 2019

Ha ha ha, well said!

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 April 2018

Just a living body! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

Thank you too for your comment, @Edward Kofi Louis.

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Bri Edwards 30 March 2018

(cont.) ...but, hey, maybe she WAS very GUILTY. i wonder what her condition is now. it is an extremely well done and captivating story. to MyPoemList. bri ;) p.s. why were you with the doctor that day, i wonder. hmm? the poem title 'pulled at me', partly because one of your commenters, Lyn Paul, is a PH friend and i wondered............

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

Her present condition is unknown to me, but two years after I had written this poem, I inquired about her from my doctor friend who told me that her condition deteriorated. I think, her situation is really grim, if not she has passed away in the mean time. Thanks for taking this poem to your MyPoem list. At that time I was visiting a friend of mine in the US. Our friend Lyn Paul lives in Australia. So no worries, but our compassion remains for the patient Lyn, whose recovery I pray for.

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Bri Edwards 30 March 2018

(cont.) .. i DO regret reading the last line of the Poet's Notes, as it makes it sound as though Lyn's medical problems stem from some sin(?) she has committed, some wrongdoing or 'mistake' in her life. i think that idea absurd, unless doctors felt that she knowingly led a lifestyle e.g. diet which contributed to the clot. (continued) ..

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

'as it makes it sound as though...' - probably so, but I didn't mean so. Thanks for pointing out this lacuna.

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