Macaronic Musicals Poem by renato mascardo

Macaronic Musicals

Rating: 5.0


a paean to you

like Mame you coax the blues out of the horn
like Mame you charm the husk right off the corn
I know the sun will come out tomorrow
with you beside me/ with you beside me
honey everything’s coming up roses
like the hills you fill my heart with the sound
of music/ with you beside me i will
never walk alone though my dreams be tossed
and blown/ you are the subject i like most
haven’t you noticed suddenly i’m bright
and breezy because of what i’m learning
about you/ damn damn damn i’ve grown accustomed
to your face/ oh no not in springtime summer
winter or fall/ no never could i leave
you at all/ but like freddie eynsford-hill
i am only good at words words words words//

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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