Made For The Usa Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Made For The Usa



If you want to win or go astray
You are just made for the USA

Too much right too much freedom
All are kings in that kingdom

Too much work too much fun
Like the hard working sun

Too much might too much money
The USA my honey

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sridatta Gupta 13 September 2012

hei i loved it.simple with strong thoughts.

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Aung Si 13 September 2012

Wow! great idea! Simple but beautiful.Short but meaningful.Style is powerful with essential rhymes.I love this.

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Thomas Hsi 13 September 2012

Powerful thoughts about the perceived failings of the national character of the USA. Please keep writing to raise awareness (especially in the USA) .

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Eindaray Kyaw 13 September 2012

So great..you can compose well about the love on the country...short but really concise poem..I appreciate this one!

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Michael Oliver 18 September 2012

I read this with an air of irony in your voice- if i am right then yes. Ambiguous but good because of it like the USA I suppose

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Ken E Hall 18 September 2012

Good point I Fail to see, all I know the USA is made up of millions of migrants that chose to live there every nation on the planet lives there together as one...thanks for the invite...regards

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 16 September 2012

What is the poet's stand? Is this a commentary or is the poet favoring USA in spite of the given odds? I think all nations have the positive and the negative sides, the natural and normal ways and the excesses.

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Allemagne Roßmann 16 September 2012

USA is bound to come to pay back on his own coin.World economy is looking to China and India.Without them-USA is like a tissue paper used in toilets.

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Jimmy Hardwick 13 September 2012

Thanks man, that was really good. I like that.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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