Magic Of Love Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

Magic Of Love

Rating: 4.8


Let the heart
dwell in the fountain of love
where love may continuously flow
into the abyss of emptiness
deep within the soul.

Let the fountain of love
embrace the quivering body
to warm it like a fur
and wash away the fears.

Let the flow
touch the numb lips
and perforate within
where frost resides
let the magic of love
subsist eternally...


11th of May 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stacey Watts 19 August 2008

This is a beautiful love poem. I like the way it flows and it is easy to read. Very nice read.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 August 2008

it's a kind of magic...............love is a real magic. nice writes joan.

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Kesav Easwaran 20 August 2008

love makes one warm hot hotter and hottest...washing away, why fear alone, in the pocess all other feels in the body and mind 10

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Kris Smith 21 August 2008

Yes a beautiful write love one of the strongest feelings and sadly lacking in this world today may it live long in your life Chris 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 21 August 2008

Yes, its a fine composition! ......10

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 18 July 2009

I like the flow of the fountain of love.

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Shaun Evans 08 September 2008

May your heart be forever filled with poetry and love.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 August 2008

Yes love has it's own magic. Nice poem.

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Riquetta Elliott 27 August 2008

I wish I could find love at this moment, but I will someday patiently. Very good poem.

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John Raubenheimer 25 August 2008

A fervent wish, almost a prayer. Well spoken.

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