Mail # 2 Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Mail # 2



On line you I miss
My last email since;
Felt bad? Or got hurt?
Feel free to tell me this
Be hard a ware not this
Be a soft ware please!

10 04 08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 11 April 2008

In these few lines you have silently said so much rather than explaining your stance…the soft lines would definitely promote flexibility and all differences erased by a smile…again a good advice to solve little tiffs which may arise from misunderstandings…

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Usha Pisharody 11 April 2008

Lol, repentance time is it? Another nice one :) [Not a haiku though, of the Japanese variety, I think! ] Still, entertaining...!

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Lynda Robson 12 April 2008

I enjoyed reading this, hardware, software, good penning my friend, Lynda x

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soothing words...make a world of difference

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Sumita Datta 23 November 2008

Your mail is so simple... makes my simle with a dimple... :)

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C T Heart 26 September 2008

Just a simple Hi! makes sense and greatly welcome...

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Mamta Agarwal 15 September 2008

Kesav, i really liked these Mails1,2. in relationships its best to be open, and save yourself heartache, at times over nothing. communication, at times not silence, brings people together.10you are teasing, serious and i liked it a lot.

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Subbaraman N V 10 June 2008

Short and sweet with a nice message!

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