'' Make My Own Choice '' Poem by Bri Mar

'' Make My Own Choice ''

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When someone passes,
If they join the masses,
I wonder do they wait in a queue,
Are they then divided into different classes?
Dependent on what they do.

Do the millionaires,
Get to say who cares,
Like they did while stationed on Earth,
Do they carry on with their illicit affairs?
Of the truth I'm afraid there's a dearth.

Does democracy rule,
Or am I being a fool,
In your Paradise does equality exist,
Is there the concept of you being cruel?
Or from genocide do you desist.

Does Heaven need maintained,
Are relationships strained,
To the master will we need to take heed,
As nobody knows can this be explained,
Does he know of our concept of greed?

The one they term God,
Will over us he maraud?
Does he always get his own way?
If we disobey will we be outlawed,
Will we be given a say?

What if we're not,
Will we be distraught,
That would leave a terrible smell,
Or will he send us somewhere hot,
Obey him or end up in Hell.

The one called creator,
The life liquidator,
Will he steal our free will and voice?
If he does, his title's dictator,
I'd much rather,

‘' Make My Own Choice ‘'

Thursday, December 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: god
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Where do we go,
I don't know,
Of facts there's a terrible lack,
When we die what seeds do we sow,
why doesn't anyone come back.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 01 December 2016

A very powerful write with a rebellious tone. It asks many significant questions. I enjoyed reading it.

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