Make Things Right Poem by Connor Whyte

Make Things Right

Rating: 5.0


As I stand alone I begin to fall. To darkness which is blind, to fall forever kept from the light. I get closer but things begin to tilt as we fall backwards through another attempt to stand. Death is unavoidable but so is life this is my chance to make it right.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Laurent 24 October 2013

Awesome - the strong desire to stand while you fall uncontrollably; one step forward, two steps back when you try to improve your life and make amends for your mistakes.

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Alex Medina 12 June 2012

Our poems are similar, at least in meaning. I enjoyed reading this piece.

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Samantha Rak 25 May 2012

Connor, I absolutely LOVE this one, short, sweet and straight to the beautiful point. Well done and PLEASE don't stop writing!

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Bella Hernandez 08 February 2012

Short nd straight to the point.... lovely ~Bella

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