Making Glass! Poem by Poetheart Morgan

Making Glass!

Rating: 5.0


The flame
Was more than a blaze
More than hot
Fervent ~ lascivious ~


The glass
Taking form
From my pulse
No-form
Cutting and chipping

Voices in the background
Deep eyes
Evoking applause

How many can do that


Bring the color to the white
The Spectrum
That rest at least
Alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 30 June 2013

nice take on glass making. a good read

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David Wood 08 June 2013

Making glass requires heat and sand. Relationships require heat and hope to turn into love. A lovely poem

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Stan Petrovich 05 June 2013

I see profundity here that really ranks with TS Eliot! Thanks, Mirna.~your friend Stan

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Sekharan Pookkat 03 June 2013

A poem is formed in poets mind after several additions, subtractions and divisions with words.your narration gives clear images of relationships which you prefer most.

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