Little Sunshine

Rookie (April 14,1989 / Kurdistan)

Making Love Under The Stars - Poem by Little Sunshine

I am sitting here till you will be here by my side making love with me under the stars
Thinking of our old days, when we were deeply in love but so out of touch

I can remember that time when I told you I wish our life together will come so soon
You said o my love what if I had wings to fly to you
I loved these words when I heard from you

coz I was waiting for you to be here with me,
To take away my lonely nights
To dry away my waiting tears
I needed you to be there with me so desperately
To tell the world nothing can be more beautiful than my love for my wife to be
At last we are together because what was between us was true love

I was in these sweet memories when you appeared in the starlight
Telling me how are you my darling wife, o where are the kids have they fallen asleep without wishing me goodnight...

For my sweet love :)

Comments about Making Love Under The Stars by Little Sunshine

  • Romeo Della Valle Romeo Della Valle (1/9/2010 10:01:00 PM)

    I did it, too, I have been there like you, it feel great, wow, well penned, great job.; ..Hope you have the chance to read some of my poems, especially 'A JOURNEY', God Bless You, Love and Peace, Romeo (Report) Reply

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  • Anjali Sinha (11/2/2009 8:19:00 AM)

    lovely poem
    so sweet, so tender
    will touch the heart of stone
    and make it molten to the bone
    -10 anjali (Report) Reply

  • Yasser Koor (10/20/2009 4:24:00 PM)

    wow i miss that way of writing what a lovely poem.
    this poem really touched my heart and it is deep and full of lovely feeling.
    it's mad me to remember lovely's made feel that i need to be a lover again...
    good work and full of lovely passions. (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle Romeo Della Valle (9/17/2009 12:40:00 AM)

    As far as I can see, your not such a little sunshine, you got a great talent, not time to waste my dear, well-penned poem, very deep, enjoyed reading it, Love and Peace, Romeo (Report) Reply

  • Hazem Al Jaber (9/2/2009 5:00:00 AM)

    making love while all stars watching our love...
    dear poet.. i am reading it again..
    so beautiful..
    hazem (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (8/12/2009 5:21:00 AM)

    Lovely poem of love full of passion and youngness
    bears thru it....all you need is a magic carpet
    Thanks for sharing
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Hazem Al Jaber (8/11/2009 4:19:00 AM)

    full of love and desires..
    passions through a braveness..
    with no shame to ask about a love..
    so beautiful with a great huge love..
    hazem al.. (Report) Reply

  • Eyan Desir (8/9/2009 5:49:00 AM)

    Good write....passionate
    10s (Report) Reply

  • Meggie Gultiano Meggie Gultiano (8/9/2009 5:32:00 AM)

    a passionate write. and i am starstruck by your very romantic words.Lovely..

    Meggie (Report) Reply

  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/8/2009 12:20:00 PM)

    full of vital passion all through/lovely (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury Sarwar Chowdhury (8/8/2009 9:49:00 AM)

    'coz I was waiting for you to be here with me,
    To take away my lonely nights
    To dry away my waiting tears'

    ahahahahaha! mind-crunchinnnnnnnggggggg!
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (8/8/2009 9:33:00 AM)

    aww sunshine.. this piece shine.. love is good yes................ you got it. (Report) Reply

  • Obinna Eruchie (8/8/2009 8:39:00 AM)

    A lovely poem full of sweet words. (Report) Reply

  • Andrew mark Wilkinson (8/8/2009 6:01:00 AM)

    Waiting for your love to come home to you, memories of family and home who does not dream of these sweet things Hati, hope he is good to such a sweet wife.. Andy 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 24, 2011

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