Marriage Poem by Allan James Saywell

Marriage

Rating: 5.0


In a perfect marriage
Within a bad relationship
A free spirit
Can become a trapped animal
Your world can become a cage

Thursday, November 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Odette 31 October 2019

Really thought provoking poem. I think women in relationships with violent men feel particularly caged. Have you ever written a poem about domestic violence? not one that justifies it, obviously....?

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Paul Warren 19 November 2015

Marriage can be this way with the wrong partner

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Shakil Ahmed 19 November 2015

yes, marriage makes ones life trapped or caged, we lose our free will in certain cases yet surrendering one's will to others whim is also enjoyable, wel l penned poem thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 November 2015

Irrespective of all of it's criticism the institution of marriage thrives, may be to keep society in order and/or for reaping fruits of a meaningful and mutually beneficial relationship. A Thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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