Marriage Bliss? ? Poem by Elisabeth Wingle

Marriage Bliss? ?



There once was a beautiful wife
She lived with a passion for life
But her passion was waning.
(He was always complaining)
The tension now cuts with a knife

Saturday, January 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: marriage,passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 11 February 2018

An insightful portrayal of a marital bliss entangled in creeping domination and control. A beautiful limerick. Thanks for sharing Elisabeth and do remain enriched.

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Wes Vogler 15 January 2016

Elisabeth Anne Wingle has become a natural limerick writer. corr waining/waning L5 maybe The tension now cuts with a knife (rhythm) good one!

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