Mars Submerged Poem by Saiom Shriver

Mars Submerged



Waters rise in
a statuary garden
slowly submerging
the statue of Mars.

Love rises in the
heart erasing
errors of
the past.

Tuesday, June 3, 2014
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Colleen Courtney 07 June 2014

Love the analogy between the two stanzas. Well done!

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