Mask Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Mask

Rating: 5.0


Behind the Mask
lives the true self
the happy - go lucky
all mushy and sweetie
is all about it..

The sad lonely self
is all by itself
surrounded by one's
own dreams thoughts
deep sown...

drizzling shower of rain
brings down the strain
slowly washes away the pain
dissolving the fake mask
forming a sparkling chain....

~14/03/09~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mystic Indian 19 August 2009

we are all changing masks every time and one can see their true self only if they look deeper beyond the image in the mirror.10/10

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rago rago 30 March 2009

You have done well why such a short verse for a good subject. Nice nice nice.

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Kesav Easwaran 17 March 2009

liked the concept inside your write, Deepti...well written piece...10

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Reshma Ramesh 17 March 2009

beautiful write............well penned....

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Catrina Heart 17 March 2009

interesting theme, meaningful and symbolic one.........10+++

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